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Collaboration Script Fire: 2


Collaboration Script Fire 2

I was responsible for righting the Fire script, this is the second draft of this script and I think its better then the previous version of this script.


Exterior: Cave, evening:

Presenter: The time is 15 million BC and where here to witness the first creation of fire by the Uuurg family, lets get a closer look.

presenter stands to the side and the camera zooms in on a caveman family. As they slight a small fire outside. and start to sit around.

Presenter: They've done it now as long as the conditions stay right they should be warm throughout to night.

Rain starts.

Presenter: Ah

Cuts to exterior: Hut Night

Presenter: As you can see they decided to move the fire undercover... wait is that really going to work.

Fire Catches onto the building 

Presenter: Ah I figured as much.

fire continues to spread to the surrounding foliage as the camera zooms out and pans onto the Presenter looking worried. the presenter signals to cut the video and a technical difficulties sign pops up.


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